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It should be noted that English is my secondary language and due to certain security precautions I was unable to have the documents professionally edited and proof read. Needless to say, there is a potential for improving it literarily. As such, consider it a ”first edition draft”. The responsibility falls upon you now as I will, for obvious reasons, not be able to develop it any further.
Any and all individuals with the appropriate skills are encouraged to contribute to a second edition of this compendium by improving and expanding it where needed.
Sincere and patriotic regards,
Andrew Berwick, London, England - 2011
semper occultus wrote:
MacCruiskeen wrote:Well, many Scandinavians do speak and even write extremely good English*, but did he really compose that gigantic screed himself? In the various bits of it that I managed to read, the English is not just grammatically flawless but it has the kind of confident fluency that non-native speakers very rarely achieve, especially in writing.
Or is there any indication that he hired a translator, or at least a proofreader?
Why English anyway, especially in a tome the size of Ulysses, if he was such a fanatical Norwegian nationalist and hater of "multiculturalism"?
*e.g. Penguin/Gnomad, Rocket Man, Dradin Kastell, etc., all on this very board. I'd be very curious to hear how they see this. Are there any detectable "Norwegianisms" in his opus magnum at all?
On Edit: OK, I downloaded the whole damn thing and found this on page 15:It should be noted that English is my secondary language and due to certain security precautions I was unable to have the documents professionally edited and proof read. Needless to say, there is a potential for improving it literarily. As such, consider it a ”first edition draft”. The responsibility falls upon you now as I will, for obvious reasons, not be able to develop it any further.
Any and all individuals with the appropriate skills are encouraged to contribute to a second edition of this compendium by improving and expanding it where needed.
Sincere and patriotic regards,
Andrew Berwick, London, England - 2011
MacCruiskeen wrote:
The emerging story of this double massacre in Norway strikes me as not just deeply horrible but also increasingly weird.
Harvey wrote:norton ash wrote:God, the damage to a small society like Norway is going to be staggering. All the parents, families, friends, neighbours, classrooms sharing the same wound of a murdered child, and that's only ground zero of where the psychic fallout begins.
Many of the parents still don't know the fate of their children as I understand it, because a number are still missing or not identified. It's unimaginably horrific. Though it can't bring back the dead or remove the trauma of the survivors and the families, I just hope that all the guilty parties are brought to justice.
stickdog wrote:Color me convinced. I don't think even Hugh Manatee's screenwriters could make this stuff up.
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